With the exception of a single out-of-place (and, in my opinion, needless) expletive, Draco Dormiens reads like an excerpt from a genuine Harry Potter novel. Well-paced, thoughtful and thoroughly entertaining - words generally not associated with 99% of the clumsy fanfiction out there.
PS: Is it just me, or does the woman's voice in the Harry Potter Pronunciation Guide sound exactly like the voice in the 'Mech labs of MechWarrior?
"Draco" "Azkaban" "Basilisk" "Timberwolf" "Enemy 'Mech unit ... destroyed."